Production- Audience feedback on Digipak front

Production- Digipak Front Draft 2

I've tried to make an alternative front cover using a different image. I think this image a lot as the focal point is the artist however I am unsure as to how it will fit together with my other products

Production- What do we need to do to improve the music video?

More projector
Changed areas where the lip syncing was off

Production- A4 Poster First Draft Feedback

The feedback from my A4 poster draft:

•  I love the colours and image. She looks strong, powerful and cool.
• I like the font of Skylar but it doesn't go with the rest of it. It needs to either occur more or not at all.
• The font is a little bit samely. Not sure, maybe it needs variation
• I like the convergence links. They're a good size 

Production- Digipak Front Draft 1

This is one of my first attempts of making my digipak front cover. It took quite a bit of photo shop however I really like it as I want all my productions to be in line with the funfair setting across my 3 products.

Production- Advert 1st Draft

This is my first draft of my advert. From this I will ask my target audience their opinion and then make changes accordingly

Production- Music Video 3rd Draft

Production- Digipak Mock up

This is my mock up of my Digipak front and my A4 Magazine that I made using found images. This gave me an idea of how I will set out the required information for successful products. I received from feedback for peers within the age target audience.

"I like the fact that Skylar and wonderful are in two different fonts. If they were both like the Skylar one it would be too girly for me" Thomas 17

"The Logo needs to be the same colour as the rest of the writing, there's something not right about them being different" Janet 19

"The text is a little difficult to read on the A4 magazine cover" Beth 20



Production- A4 Advert Layout

From the research I conducted, I managed to put together a plan of how I will set out the advert.

Production- Editing my Pictures on photoshop

Image comparson - Kizoa Movie - Video - Slideshow Maker
I used photoshop in order to edit my pictures so that they are ready to be used in my digipak. Here are a few examples

Production- Music Video Draft 2 and Feedback

Feedback from our target audience and critics:

"I like it. It's ambitious but it works."

"Good panoramic camera movement."

"Could fade in at the start but I'm not sure because it could hide the title."

"Turn down the saturation to wash out the colour."

"Turn up the contrast"

"Turn up the brightness to give the colour more richness."

Production- Music video Draft 1 and Feedback

Feedback from our target audience and critics:

"The lip syncing scenes need work, they're a little bit out of sync."

"The ending could be faded out. It is a little abrupt right now."

"I think the Projector scene is a little bit dark"

"The projector scenes could reoccur more frequently."

"I don't think that the train scenes fit with the rest of the video. They seem a bit amateur."